The shoes don't bother me, actually. The issues are mostly anatomical (boobs, crazy arms, thigh-to-calf transition, broken ankle, et cetera). The exaggerated cowl is an interesting choice and I think it works very well for Aradia's character. This may seem like a minor detail but I REALLY like the way you did the wings; it fits easily with in the comic's symbology but ties in with your own coloring style. Her pants/skirt look like its made from velvet; not sure if that's intentional. Face is very good, delicately colored. Sentences are truncated. Geo out.